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[Carrotland Adventures Pt1]

9lb Review

I found this really amusing, just one or two little comments:

1) The voice acting at the beginning lacked a little something, just up until it pauses for you to be threatened by Carrotman. Otherwise I thought the rest of the voices were really well done and fit the characters.

2) The shot of Carrotman's TV was just a little bit too long I think, felt like it stalled the action a bit.

3) When Carrotman shoots the narrator, it wasn't immediately obvious to me who he was talkng to and I had to watch it again to work out what was going on. Perhaps just for that brief moment put a bit more emphasis on the difference between the voices of the narrator and the Carrotman. Or perhaps have Carrotman voiced by somebody else to make the difference more marked?

Otherwise I really enjoyed this and am now going to go and find the second half. Keep up the references! :)

CarrotPatrol responds:

Thank you. The second part is now online.
You have some very valid points, particularly the one about the TV. Something which I feel I might have repeated a bit with some of my other films and that I will definitely take into account for future films.

There are Beatles references in 3 of my films, including this one.
The other 2 are Monster Marathon and its sequel Midnight Flash...
You can find them here: www.youtube.com/carrotpatrol